Kapwing Edit Review: Halie-B Bakery

Video edited on Kapwing

Summary: The text is a review of Emory's edit of a video for Haley Bees Bakery. The reviewer points out some areas for improvement, such as the sound balance between the 360 camera audio and the subject's voice, as well as the choice of logo and font. The reviewer made some minor adjustments to the edit, including zooming in on the subject's face to better capture her expressions, selecting a font that better represents the "flower child" theme of the bakery, and adjusting the opacity of the logo. They also made changes to the text outline and added the phone number to the call-to-action. Finally, the reviewer chose a different music track that better fits the sixties theme and adjusted the audio levels throughout the video to ensure the subject's voice remains clear. Despite the changes, the reviewer commends Emory for a near-perfect edit.

Outline:

1. Introduction

   • Purpose: To provide feedback on Emory's edit of Haley Bees Bakery video

2. Sound balance

   • Issue: 360 camera audio drowning out the subject's voice

   • Solution: Adjusting the studio sound and compressor settings in Descript

3. Framing and zooming

   • Issue: Subject not appearing to smile much in the original framing

   • Solution: Zooming in on the subject's face to better capture expressions

4. Logo and font choice

   • Issue: Original logo not as clean or consistent with the bakery's branding

   • Solution: Selecting a font that better represents the "flower child" theme and adjusting the logo's opacity

5. Text and call-to-action

   • Changes made: Removing "Batavia," capitalizing letters in the URL, and adding the phone number

   • Issue: Unable to find the bakery's hours to include in the call-to-action

6. Music selection and audio adjustments

   • Issue: Original music not fitting the sixties theme

   • Solution: Choosing a new music track and adjusting audio levels throughout the video to ensure the subject's voice remains clear

7. Conclusion

   • Overall, Emory's edit was near-perfect

   • The reviewer's changes were based on their longer experience in video editing